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©2008-2009 *Turn--to-Paige
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Birds on the bees.

White clay, acrylic paint, wire, skills.

the Bee which is painted like a: ______ (can you tell what kind?), and the size of a:_____ ;[appx. 5 in. from head to abdomen]

and the bird which is painted like a: ________ and also the size of this ______ ;[appx. 2 in. wingspan]

The nature of love and sex. Right side up or upside down? or sideways up.. or...


Process: I really enjoyed making this piece... one of my much more recent pieces in clay... nice to not have an assignment to follow. Woo! go crazy! Conceptual... sweet. word.

Critiques


:iconautumnights:
What actually caught my eye on this piece was the very effective way that you captured the creations photographically. The way you took the shots is very inspiring for those who like to work off of reference or seek quality stock for manipulation. As a photomanipulator, I can see a million ways to use these photos! But I digress.

The work itself is exceptionally well done. You've mimicked the colors of the respective subjects so beautifully that you'd swear these came straight from the set of a professional fantasy film. The bird/bee catches my eye immediately in the way you've webbed the wings to an insectile perfection and also added that bit of 'furriness' to the stripes very reminiscent of the fuzziest bumble bee.

The only thing I might have attempted to affect better would be to add more of a traditional feather look to the bee/bird. In the wings especially. It would be truly exceptional if you were to layer real feathers over the bee/bird's wing structure to make it truly texturally dynamic.

Not only is this a very creative concept, but the execution is meticulous and the effort that you've put in is quite evident. You've also got a knack for photographing your work very professionally which is a huge benefit if you intent to capitalize on your skills in the future!

Overall a great piece and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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:iconlamorien:
impressive. Your clay work is really awesome. I'm terrible with clay..

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The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.~
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:iconturn--to-paige:
Thank you so much... I've got some more to put up... keep an eye out. ;)

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onomatopoeia

My anti-drug.
:iconlamorien:
certainly!

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The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.~
my gallery: [link]
Sky-Club: [link]
Just Portraits: [link]
:iconvixxi72:
Ha ha - that's a frivolous piece. The bee is a bit clumsy, it needs to shape up:-)
:iconskotsoad:
Very cool and original, love the bug on its back!

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"Mum, Dad I love you! please don't sell me to Paris Hilton." -Butters, South Park.
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Needs a new quote
:iconturn--to-paige:
Haha yeah... I sculpted the bee from a real dead bee.

Thanks for checkin' it out, yo. :P

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onomatopoeia

My anti-drug.
:iconturn--to-paige:
:D Thanks!

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onomatopoeia

My anti-drug.
:iconvixxi72:
I looked at the pair again and I really like them both A LOT. The birdy is a mischievous little thing, isn't it?
Together they just crack me up:-)
:iconturn--to-paige:
Haha yeah.. It seems like the bird has a bit of a napoleon complex. :giggle:

Thank you for the fav. *beams*

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onomatopoeia

My anti-drug.

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